Is this my home?

by Invited   Oct 18, 2008


Is this my home?
A scene of destruction,
A crave for restoration
And once a home, gone,
In the heartless rubble and smoke.

Is this my home?
A place that cries for renewal
And what used to be a chapel ,
Blithe and Blissful.
Preaches on the Holy Bible-
May God save them now!

Is this my home?
A place in which prayer was unneeded
And now since the bomb was planted.
Hymns have been chanted
But none of the pain has ended.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xx

    Amazing...emotion, heartfelt. Thank you for the comment, but I'm not accepting it...I'm still in denial.

  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow chinwe, another amazing write-
    very sad, very strong, very emotive.

    another 5/5
    aish

  • 16 years ago

    by Good Enough

    I hate the pain in a home. it hurts. i have a broken home and i dont live there anymore. soo 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyn

    Sorry the comment I just gave should have had God with a capital 'G'.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lyn

    Very well expressed. Is this your experience? If so my heart goes out to you.
    May god be with you.

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