Deceit

by Candy Rain   Oct 18, 2008


Heart beats all around me
Love is in the air
I'm dyeing all by myself
My heart isn't there
Slowly losing my life
I feel the deceit
Crying tears of pain
Tears of fear
It isn't fair that i lost my heart beat
Lost my baby
The only one that cared
It's deceit that made me lose my life
Deceit is what i fear
Could've been more honest but now the end is here

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  • 16 years ago

    by enigmatic_prey

    I can feel what messages or emotions you want to convey...the poem is nice but the flow is little bit off..but it's okay...we are just the same...my poems' flow isn't also good...however. i know...we can improve,right??

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