A wonderful piece filled with such passion, of returning to your promised land, to a family who happily awaits you. Great descriptions and wording used in your poem, which certainly brought it alive! 5/5 from me, take care and keep writing, always and forever... |
by NightFlyer
Thank you for your kind words. I have been waiting for months to move back to my home town near Boston, Massachusetts. My deep longing to return plus memories of the place inspired this poem. |