Faded Memories

by Jes   Oct 18, 2008


The memories fade
The flowers die
Still I'm left here
Wondering why

Why you killed me
Why i killed you
I didn't mean to
My intentions were true

People come
People go
I thought you would stay
But I didn't know

I didn't know
We would turn out like this
Our special memories
I know I'll miss

I don't want to forget you
But I have no choice
You'll always be a part of me
You were my voice

When you think of our time
Please don't be mad
I know you don't care
But your a'll i've ever had

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  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I absoultely love your writing!!!! i just got broken up with two days ago and this was amazing to read!!! please please please read my last two and give me your feedback???

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    At one point I felt like this about my ex but I now realise that what I've got is alot better than what I ever had with him. Good portray of emotions, 5/5. Em x

  • 16 years ago

    by FallenAngel

    Loved this poem. It truly came from the heart. Great job. 5/5 :)

  • 16 years ago

    by kate

    Wow this is really sad.
    but its really good poem you have.
    im sorry if this is a true experience in your life. it is really tough to let go of that one person you truly fell in love with and they were everything you had. I know i've been there and its just so messed up sometimes. you did an amazing job of showing your emotions and diana said it the flow was good.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 16 years ago

    by Diana

    Sad but very good wording (when expressing emotions and thoughts), good flow 5/5

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