Shes going to start

by AngelicDecadence   Oct 19, 2008


Ever since she was born,
This girl has been torn,
From the beginning of time,
Her life was a crime,
She never knew love,
And she hid, like a hand in a glove,
She sheided her heart,
For fear of hurt,
By her family, she was hated,
Her friends, rated.
She was beat,
It was not neat,
She tried to get out,
But shes beginning to doubt.
Is there a way out?
Can she leave this place?
Or is she just a disgrace?
She hasn't known what to do,
Ever since she was two.
But shes decided shes going to start.
No matter how long it takes to depart.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Great rhyme scheme... kinda sad... really sad=/ still very good tho... Nice work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessica

    O my gosh I loved it!!! It's one of my favs!!!!!! The whole thing was awesome!!! YOu go girl!!!!!!!!! *hugs*
    10/10

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Nice one!! i really like this one. you have alot of good poems but this one makes the top 5 by far.
    'by her family, she was hated
    her friends, rated'

    i love that line! keep it up! you rock!! ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Your poem is very sad and full of emotion. I sorry for this sadness..I'm sure that she will find a way out! 5/5