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Excellent write very beautiful 5/5

A very nice poem. Me being a Pegan, i enjoyed the nature and the peace of mind that you brought. It spoke to my spirit has a pegan poem, this might be, or it might not, but i loved it the same. The way the lake reflected the sky, I could see the clouds in the water in my mind, i could hear the birds singing, i could feel the cool grass on my back and the summer breaze rising from the shore of the lake to the infinite wonders of real and fictional lands far away in a peacful time. The desire to share with someone was more then apparent, tho breifly voiced, but I could feel the longing to have my wife beside me at the very moment that i read that line about wanting someone specific with you, and then the feelings turned toward my great grand mother has i read on that this desire could never be fullfilled, for my great grandmother has past on. I loved this poem, its beautiful in every sence of the word. By the way, thank you very much for your comments on Sonnet of A Fallen Angel and Raven of My Soul,

This poem is fantastic. It really did make me smile. Great job

5/5

So sad, very beautiful....it would be nice if the stars could bring someone back

Great poem, keep up the good work!