I don't believe this work to be "perfect" 5, but without a doubt this work is superior to a mere "4" and obviously created by someone with talent! This creator has that elusive knack to make the poem's receiver feel more like the poet is speaking to them like a "friend" not just an interested voyuer encountering some dried something in a literary form. This poem is organic...poet-poem-experiencer...it has a strong pulse that moves it forward without seemingly dependent on structure while playing as if the poem's encounter is having their very sinews being played in some Orphic melody!