Really a great poem, keep it up, kel.

This one hit way too close to home for me. It brought up a lot of emotions that I didn't think were there.

I went through this exact same situation. She wants time alone and wants me to go back to school and get a career...

very good write, though I wish I didn't read it.

5/5

... im speechless.. those comments.. from others.. das not wat itz about.. i truly kno wat itz about.. and u kno i do.. i understand fully wat ur sayin.. and umm.. yea.. im jus speechless.. great poem.. GREAT poem

This is excellent, everyone else pretty much just summed it up tho. Nice work. keep writing! 5/5

Well done.. The title is sooo attractive! Keep it up 5/5

Awww this is very sweet indeed, you really pull off this mixed emotions poetry...I can really feel you hanging on things that you don't want to let go

Excellent job

5/5 from me

Your words are so sweet and full of meaning. And it is true sometimes you have to let go of something that you wish for and give it time and space. Great job 5/5

This one is really just brilliant. Its really sweet and just wow =]

Aww that is so sweet and so sad st the same time, i'm sure your friend wasn't to happy about it , but i'm sure you had your reasons.
All in all a lovely poem though very sad.
Very well written Cara

Grant