Comments : Keep your mouth shut

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Awww, Ive been in this situation before.. Im sure alot of people can relate..

    Just atip, you dont need to rhyme every 1st and 3rd line, just every 2nd and 4th to create a nice flow :) Cos some lines seem forced.....

    Nice though, 5/5