You used 'I' alot, maybe use 'me' for better flow? |
by Clown
Well, im not a pro cuz alot of my work is in question with spelling, but from i saw, it is a beautifully written poem and esay to understand, i think so anyways, corect me if im wrong, but this poems is about u leading someone on without meaning to cuz you still hold a love for another so you cant give urself in that way to the person that you misled, am i right, anyways, i noticed some grammer mistakes, we all make them so dont worry too much about that, just try and fix them has you urself notice them |