Music of your love

by mostafa   Oct 20, 2008


Here is the 1st thing i wrote

I look in the distance i see your face
there is no resistance but then no trace
i close my eyes i hear your voice
i look around me all over the place
but nothing is there
just the same empty space
i go out for a walk with no one with me to talk
i keep going round and round
there is no place to be found
just trying to forget
what for you i once felt
as i escape in the streets
i can't hide from it,i can't beat it , i can't cheat
it keep playing in my head
every time i close my eyes i hear it
every time i think of you i feel it
the music of your love
it just won't let me go

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  • 15 years ago

    by D Jon Versatino

    Lovely poem,Boy! Keep it upper, man. U can check mi works out too.

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamAwish

    Loved it and keep it up ^^

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    You really described trying to get someone you love out of your thoughts.
    "i can't hide from it,i can't beat it , i can't cheat
    it keep playing in my head
    every time i close my eyes i hear it
    every time i think of you i feel it
    the music of your love
    it just won't let me go"
    These were my favorite phrases. They were very stong and filled with emotion. 5/5

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