Comments : Music of your love

  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    You really described trying to get someone you love out of your thoughts.
    "i can't hide from it,i can't beat it , i can't cheat
    it keep playing in my head
    every time i close my eyes i hear it
    every time i think of you i feel it
    the music of your love
    it just won't let me go"
    These were my favorite phrases. They were very stong and filled with emotion. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by DreamAwish

    Loved it and keep it up ^^

  • 15 years ago

    by D Jon Versatino

    Lovely poem,Boy! Keep it upper, man. U can check mi works out too.