Forever

by dirtyhands   Oct 20, 2008


Im thingking of someone
always on my mind
she may not seem angelic
and yah,she's a girl
but this girl, is my only girl.
sHe's always grasping my heart
When ever i see her perfect face,
and my heart just freezes. . .
I also miss her caring soul
eating away my sorrow and sadness.
with me in her loving arms,
The memory returns.
just thingking of her eyes
I can't get help hipnotized.
I'm going crazy over you.
these memories like photographs,
photographs like tatoos, they will never erased.
for these thoughts,
thoughts of you.
will always be a part of me
over the pain in my heart
a new tatoo will be sealed
and that tatoo is the love you gave me,
and I want to tell you
that i will always carry you in my heart,,,
FOREVER,

hope you like it all,,
ill be glad to have some coments and ratings,
tnx xD
dirtyhands

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  • 16 years ago

    by Searching for Guidance

    This was so moving. my fav stanza:

    I also miss his caring soul
    eating away my sorrow and sadness.
    with me in his loveing arms,
    The memory returns.

    the part about his soul eating away ur sorrow and sadness really touched me. it was so visual within its meaning. nicely done!

  • 16 years ago

    by samie renae

    I like this a lot i can really relate to it with me and my boyfriend

  • 16 years ago

    by Skyfire

    I like the imagery where you compare memories to photographs, and photographs to tattoos. Nicely done.