I think this is very emotional. Everyone needs a guardian angel. great job. |
This was so moving! The flow was a little off..but I still understood the whole way through, I couldn't stop reading. |
by Ken
Eveyone always needs someone to hod them together when things are hard. It sounds like your angel was that perfect person. I could picture how everything look down to when you looked into his eyes. |
by SolemnWish
I have my angel already. And Im glad you had yours. Sometimes unfortunately we cant keep them :( |
Its nice to think we have a guardian angel, even if we don't its nice to just pretend we do. I'd want the person I love most by my side forever, I wouldn't feel alive or whole without them. Great work 5/5 Remember always capitalize your i's because its you so its always a capital no matter what. Nice work |
Wow i really loved this, it was so touching. I loved how it went from like just a boy and then transitioned to the angel. I loved it, and it was great. a well deserved 5/5 |
Vey mysyical ..I like this |