Comments : Broken Spirit

  • 16 years ago

    by HuRtInG bEcAuSe Of YoU

    Oh, Hun...if you need anything and I mean anything...let me know
    *tons of hugs*
    ~Alex

  • 16 years ago

    by Mazie

    Wow. We don't know each other but I'm friendly. I'm here for you through anything

    Mazie

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Awwwwwww. so sad. but i love it. keep strong. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by XxHiis BooxX

    I like this poem,
    this says a lot, its a little choppie in some stops, but other then that all its great, and thanks for the comment on my poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by ALEX

    Good feeling.
    This was really good! 9/10, only for these two lines:
    "Hidden away my feelings are
    Showing no emotion is how I am"
    The backwards wording makes them a little awkward, although I commend your creativity.