Will you Please look at me once More?
by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden Oct 20, 2008
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A Quatern is a sixteen line French form composed of four quatrains. It is similar to the Kyrielle and the Retourne. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quatrain. The first line of stanza one is the second line of stanza two, third line of stanza three, and fourth line of stanza four. A quatern has eight syllables per line. It does not have to be iambic or follow a set rhyme scheme. |
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16 years ago
by Dark Savior
I've seen this done. It is very hard to do, I commend you for doing that.
You seem to lose yourself in thought instead of the poem. You lose a lot of what you might have if you were to not pressure yourself into writing this. I felt that the Line 1 etc really took away from it. I know that it was for informational purposes, but it seemed like you were doing it for yourself as well.
I wish there was some way so that you could explain the style instead of having to put it at the start, it also took away, but I disregarded that.
All in all it was a very good poem. It is a topic that didn't really surprise me, It's done a lot and it's too bad. I loved the way you put it. and my interupteration of the poem is that it's a person looking into a mirror.
That is what I love about this poem, it can have so many meanings to so many people.
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16 years ago
by Mister 47
Mm ,will you look at me once more?
a quest that hold soo much passion and a kind of sadnes at the same time,
the poem , as a matter of fact lade me feel the sadness of the situation and despite the fact , that it is sad , i enjoyed reading it ,
and for very big parts of the poem , i can ask the same question to my self , will you look at me once more?
as usual 5/5
