Mm ,will you look at me once more?

a quest that hold soo much passion and a kind of sadnes at the same time,

the poem , as a matter of fact lade me feel the sadness of the situation and despite the fact , that it is sad , i enjoyed reading it ,

and for very big parts of the poem , i can ask the same question to my self , will you look at me once more?

as usual 5/5

I've seen this done. It is very hard to do, I commend you for doing that.

You seem to lose yourself in thought instead of the poem. You lose a lot of what you might have if you were to not pressure yourself into writing this. I felt that the Line 1 etc really took away from it. I know that it was for informational purposes, but it seemed like you were doing it for yourself as well.

I wish there was some way so that you could explain the style instead of having to put it at the start, it also took away, but I disregarded that.

All in all it was a very good poem. It is a topic that didn't really surprise me, It's done a lot and it's too bad. I loved the way you put it. and my interupteration of the poem is that it's a person looking into a mirror.

That is what I love about this poem, it can have so many meanings to so many people.

Thanks for sharing!