Amazing! I love the ending of the poem "If only I didn't remember, but I never want to forget"...

It is a good poem but I feel that it doesn't rhyme all the way through, I would suggest that you either rhyme all the way or fon't rhyme at all..

I have another tip for you.. the poem would be much easier to read and follow if you wrote it like this --->
I lay here awake all night with thoughts of you
i only wish you would tell me just what i should do
i remember sitting with you in the rain
etc.

This i s an amazing poem but I would have to disagree with AnCi about the rhyming, it does not have to rhyme all the way as long a you can make good transitions between when rhyming and not rhyming it should always turn out good.

Well I think everybody who is a teenager or ever was a teenager can relate to this piece. Not just the love part and losing it, but for me the "watching" a movie part hahaha I thought I was only one who did that shit haha great work 5/5

I agree with Karl. I am a teenager lol and I have been through this.
I do the movie thing lol
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Nice I like the word play here as well as the style. I think you could correct a bit on the capatilization. My favorite lines were:
i remember sitting with you
in the rain
i remember you brushing
the hair from my face

Its so simple and yet it has so much emotion put into it.
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I agree with DarkCrystalbtrfy (above).. this poem has such a simplicity about it, yet there is so much emotion expressed.

I absolutely love the powerful ending:

"If only I didn't remember
but I never want to forget"

I also disagree with AnCi... the poem doesnt need to rhyme its perfectly fine as it is.

Well done. 5/5