Hiding

by AngelicDecadence   Oct 20, 2008


She enters the school,
Hiding her soul.
Her eyes shining with false hope,
For inside, this girl has broke.

She has no friends,
As she lives her life, pretend.
Those around her, pay no attention,
To the girl who wanders with no aggression.

She prefers the shadows,
Where no one follows.
She's free in her mind,
And expels all whom cross the line.

She rarely speaks, her voice meek,
So shes thought weak.
Why? She wonders, has her life turned so bleak?
She used to be at the peak!

But again.. as the bell rings,
And the papers are fling-ed.
She exits the school,
Hiding her soul...

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  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    This is nicely riten here. the word are great. the feeling are there. it sounds kinda like me. broken inside and alwayz pretending. i love it and i give u a hands five *hands five* Oops hehe i missed lol.. well please do keep it up! u got talent use it.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Beautiful yet sad write, it was enjoyable to read and you deserve a 5/5 =]
    Excellent job your portrayal of emotion in this poem was amazing

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    This poem is really easy to relate to .. Considering there's someone like that in everyones school who you always wonder what thier life is like . The flow is off in a few places , and the lines almost rhyme but they don't .. But you get away with it . I'll give you a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Sounds like meee! awesome poem!

    keep it up, i love it. 5/'5

  • 16 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Great poem. I enjoyed it. Keep up the great writting!

    -xx-

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