Hear , See and speak .

by Mister 47   Oct 21, 2008


**************contest poem**************

Holding my mouth to halt the hurt from getting out
Still the words I hear from your eyes are shouts

I cover my ears with your hand to hear less
What your eyes has spoken hit me in the chest

Your words divided me into three major parts
But I am still wondering where do I put my heart

Sometimes, I hear what you say with my eyes
And sometimes I see it drawing with your lies

I close my eyes to stop the echo in my head
But in my mind your words and starting threads

If you look inside me you will find three poor guys
Each one of them, hold his own disguise

Don't hear, don't speak and don't you ever say
The evil you think, but you do every day

At last evil, is not something you see
It is something you do, and something you be

You are the demon and angel combined
You choose to be, what you want in mind

Don't blame your God for the words that your do
It is not him to blame, point simply at you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A powerfull poem, it seems to me you and this woman will never be an item....
    Is this the contest you have written out yourself? I haven't checked it yet..
    An enjoyable read:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    Good poem, I enjoyed it and it seemed to ring abit and I could picture it.

    If you look inside me you will find three poor guys
    Each one of them, hold his own disguise

    After this line it really started to confuse me. It was off with the end rythme, but not enough to take it away from th poem or even from the effect.

    At last evil, is not something you see
    It is something you do, and something you be

    You are the demon and angel combined
    You choose to be, what you want in mind

    those two stanza's really made m confused.

    The Mind rythme was really forced in my opinion it's almost as if you had the end rythme for that before you even had the start of it.

    I really liked this poem and felt that there was a lot of places for improvements in it. All in all a really good read.

    5/5

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