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by Disasterpiece Oct 21, 2008 category : Life, society / patriotism
Pluse quickens Blood rushes through my ears Wide-eyed, panicked What the Hell am I doing here? Screams from all sides Bile rises in my throat Dying man reaching out to me.. What is this about? Scramble frantically Through blood Mud Fear In every waking moment Invoulantary memories Force me to shed a tear I thought it was over But it seems I'm always here.
by SoUrNameIsTia
I LOVE it =]] best parts: "What the Hell am I doing here?" << lol, that reminded me for a sec. i like that. "Bile rises in my throat" <<that was nasty. but a very creative and intresting way to describe....that. i loved ur word choice and how u described things. 5/5! ~tia =]