Comments : Heart on a String

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    First: awww
    second: made me smile and happy
    third: awwwwwww

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    She was the queen of monkey bars
    And this sandbox world

    ^^ i forgot. >.< i really love that phrase sandbox world. like...a lot.

  • 16 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Aww. That was very sweet. I don't know if it had any truth behind it or not, but it was the type of poem any romantic would want written for them.

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Awww. that is so creative its amazing. i really liked the last two lines of yur poem and i liked how you added a shakespeare (?) quote in it. 5/5 nice job. ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachelle

    Awww I really liked it