by Jessie
Incredible, I wish I could rate this a ten. Your chioce of words is simply impecable. Not only is it a great poem it would be an awesome song/ Just trememdous... I liked the way u ended every part the same, and started it with the next like of the first part.... just amazing |
by wendy
This one is my favorite, it's really deep and I can relate. |
by Brittany C
I liked this poem. It is a sad one about love. I'm sure that there are a lot of people who could relate to it in one way or another. The rhyming was great and kept the flow going good. 5/5 |
SERIOUSLY AMAZING, your flow was great, your pictures and words played on so well. It was greatly original nice work^^ |
by SashaMirage
This was really amazing. I liked the vast vocabulary that you used. The title really suited the poem and I like that you repeated it throughout the poem. 5/5 |
by Hurtingsoul
You have fantastic vocabulary and what sets you apart from the other guys is that you know how to use it and mke sense of it. |
by Dark Savior
Very well done. I'm impressed by the fact that you actually knew who Lamarca was at all. |
by Rachel RTVW
Excellent job on this form. Deep emotion, excellent word choice and the rhyming is not forced. Had I not already cast my 3 votes for the weekly contest, I surely would have nominated this one. Good luck, this one is a winner! |
The win is very deserved |
by Sylvia
Very well written. These lines are the ones that reverberated for me. |
by Manish
Magical and divine........... |
by LearningPoet
Wow nice poem man |
by kyah waters
I think you poems is THE GREATS I HAVE EVER EVER EVER heard it is fantastic you are so good at writng them |
by Ixora
Simply beautiful. every word was arranged and magickal. all the emotion meant to be felt were apparent. you truly have talent. |
by Im not broken anymore
This is so great... Of course you know that you won lol but ya it really is... I think it may be the best poem iv ever read... Excellent job!! |
I love the title of this poem it has so much emotion in it. The rhyme scheme is great as well as the rythm. I can defenatly relate to the feelings in this poem. I look forward to reading your other work |
WWWWWWOOOOWWW?!!! never had i thought that someone could write a poem so beautiful as this one. your words flow more than the mississippi river. your comphrehension skills are very high. i can tell that you are an intelligent person who can use their knowledge to come up with this this masterpiece. |
by Jenni Marie
"With one resplendent orb, these secrets impart, |