Nitin
When you asked me to do this collab with you I was honored....I know how many bombings have been takeing place in your country and how close they have come to your home.....to be able to express these feelings with you was a wonderful feeling...I could never ask for a better friend :)
Love you
Cindy

How true and very well written! From start
to end this poem spoke with emotions we all share..well done.
Take care.

Great job!! i really like it!

Don't wait for burials and funeral pyres
We are never promised another day
so true...excellent poem.heartfelt.

An excellent write. The verses blend well as it should be in a collab. The last verse is especially poignant and so very true. Good job to both of you. 5/5