Wow ..
this is so heartbreaking.
the feelings expressed, the message behind, the flow, everything , so simple . but it hurts ust to read .. greatly done , an amazingly sad write, indeed.

i ust loved the way you started, the words melted together so finely, giving the stanza a rythmic, yet poignant feel.Superb work done here.
some parts really take you away somewhere else,i love it.
like this one here
"..All I could do was silently watch you take this new stand,
Where life would ruin you deliberately till the very end.
Cos you decided to choose this "wrong" was of life,
Drugs, alcohol and everything else became your new drive.."

Very relatable must say.loved how you delivered it elegantly as a story.
A Great Poignant Piece.

~Wake~

WOW that was a very sad and melancholy poem, it was obviously written in a moment of deep sadness.
Your words seem to display a deep regret for things left unsaid or perhaps undone, to lose a loved one in any way especialy death is one of the most tragic experiences to go through, and always leaves one with a thousand questions. All in all a good poem, well done

Grant