Once there...

by Shellaine shelli   Oct 21, 2008


The feelings i felt were so strong
but the flame of our feelings just couldn't go on,
the more i cared,
the more i fell.

my feelings for you lead me straight
to a self inflicted hell.
i fell for you from the night we met,
my feelings for you are something
i will never regret.

i understand that you are now with her
and i am sorry if anything i said left you hurt.
I'm sorry for all the depression
you had to see,
I am so sorry you didn't get to experience the real me.

love caused pain
and now my tears fall like rain.
emotions run
and i can't keep up,
this is just part of being in love.

you left me for her
and left me to burn,
fall in the red hot flames
and leave me in my on going state
of happiness now been erased.

if you ever decided that you care
then just remember i was once there...

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  • 16 years ago

    by dirtyhands

    Another great peice!
    i love it

    "The feelings i felt were so strong
    but the flame of our feelings just couldn't go on,
    the more i cared,
    the more i fell."

    i like this so much like im feeling it,,
    nice one!

    "love caused pain
    and now my tears fall like rain.
    emotions run
    and i can't keep up,
    this is just part of being in love."

    this too,,
    like i love u but this loves hurting me,,

    "if you ever decided that you care
    then just remember i was once there..."

    and this lines saying like you cant let go,,

    i love this,,
    ill keep reading your poems,,
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey Shellaine well written girl i know exactly what you're going through and the feelings you're feeling. Believe it or not there is always a brighter future ahead and i wish you well in finding it

    Grant

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