by The Angel of Secrets Oct 21, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
The people sit down at a green and wooden table, |
That was....simply amazing :) i adore it with everything im worth. the last line was so pure and true that i am left speachless |
'Life is like the game, you can choose to be untrue, |
by Bre Monique
I like the theme. It was different. I enjoyed reading this. |
The flow was a little off, but this poem was brilliant. Maybe I only love it so much because I'm addicted to poker and playing a poker tournament as I'm reading this haha. But I loved the poem... no one else writes on this topic. It's so original... Great write! 5/5 |
by HaileyHelen
It was... great... It flowed nicely... and was powerfull... it was a great read. Nice scheme. overall good job=] 5/5 |