Comments : The Heartless Game

  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Once again amazing job!

    5/5

    keep it up :]

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    It was... great... It flowed nicely... and was powerfull... it was a great read. Nice scheme. overall good job=] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    The flow was a little off, but this poem was brilliant. Maybe I only love it so much because I'm addicted to poker and playing a poker tournament as I'm reading this haha. But I loved the poem... no one else writes on this topic. It's so original... Great write! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bre Monique

    I like the theme. It was different. I enjoyed reading this.

  • 15 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    'Life is like the game, you can choose to be untrue,
    But you never play your own cards - you play the man across from you.'

    Amazin!!! ^_^

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by waiting for the unknown

    That was....simply amazing :) i adore it with everything im worth. the last line was so pure and true that i am left speachless