Comments : An Apathetic World

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Emotions faded by opinions never true,
    Bodies hidden in the shadows, where no one can see you.
    Blending into an apathetic state of mind,
    False beauty and point of views all entwined.

    I think this was a great way to start the poem out! it was powerfull and I enjoyed it very much=]

  • 15 years ago

    by maxapug

    I really like this poem... Keep it up