I can relate to this highly within my own family.My dad used to be an abusive alcoholic but he has stopped drinking and things are getting better.The emotion in this poem was raw and deep.The word choice broad and brilliant.5/5

-Amber

While I'm not normally a fan of poetry written in this style, I really enjoyed reading it.

Your last stanza is my favorite one, for multiple reasons...The usage of rhyme further accentuates the importance of what's being said, while the metaphor that you used continued to build upon the aforementioned statements.

Great Job, 5/5 without a doubt. Keep it up.

Very deep and pwoerful piece 5/5.

As you have not failed to mention, this is coming straight from the heart...where it hurts the most. Your words convey potent emotions and deep thought. Good stuff. 5/5.

-Rolo :]