Only for a moment

by kati   Oct 21, 2008


With the sky still dark, the sun still sleeping
I awake with sleep in my eyes and my heart still beating
How i find the strength to wake from a night of dreams of you, that secret i shall never know
As my feet hit the cold floor, im shocked out of my dream state
But only for a moment
Only for a moment im allowed to forget you
Only for a moment im allowed to forget you were mine

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sourav

    The theme is good and appreciate the feelings behind it. But structure is not very good. you can make it better.

  • 16 years ago

    by Saul

    I agree with Hear You Me! Wonderful feeling and expression in this poem! I felt it as well and made me relate to my dreams as well! I gave it a 5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    Im amazed that this previously got a 3/5, i think its really powerful imagery of life with the beating of the heart, the shock from the cold and forgeting for a moment, and the dreams and the sadness they create. its all created in a really poetic way that makes me wish everyone could see what i see when i read this poem, it just seems really poweful but simple - thats the beauty of it to me. sorry for rambling! i gave it 5.

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