Im amazed that this previously got a 3/5, i think its really powerful imagery of life with the beating of the heart, the shock from the cold and forgeting for a moment, and the dreams and the sadness they create. its all created in a really poetic way that makes me wish everyone could see what i see when i read this poem, it just seems really poweful but simple - thats the beauty of it to me. sorry for rambling! i gave it 5.

I agree with Hear You Me! Wonderful feeling and expression in this poem! I felt it as well and made me relate to my dreams as well! I gave it a 5!

The theme is good and appreciate the feelings behind it. But structure is not very good. you can make it better.