by Meme
OMG!!!!!! |
Oh, I absolutely love this poem. It conveys such a sincere, and giving heart. (: The way in which you placed your words really gave it an old timey romantic feel, and the cadence was practically flawless. I also liked how you started each stanza with an exclamatory statement, placing the emphasis with the most simple, but most important notions of the heart. Overall, this piece really made me smile, it is very sweet and passionate! |
by Deana
What a lucky women...to have this kind of devotion from one who can express it so well. Excellent! |
by Cindy
Bert |