Hey thank you so much for the info and i will try and improve but i think i will cause i have you as my teacher!

I think the 1st line was pretty good. The way you ask questions in the start makes a good atmosphere for the reader.

I have a suggestion.
(When) Do you think its love?
is it love when you dont even know anything about a person but yet it
- Put 'when' at the start. That way it will make the poem flow better.

Another suggestion is that.
- Make your lines shorter
- Chop other lines and make stanzas
(Structure) is very important in poetry :)
- Just think that a poem is a song without a tune.

Anyway, keep writing :)

I like what you hve penned down about love. Love is a word can be portrayed in mnay different ways and felt by many different emotion. I like how you portray love with the question that lingers around you.

Btw the are some spelling errors:
foever should be forever &
tel should be tell

Well other than than i really enjoy ur write.keep it up

5/5

For your first poem this is pretty darn good it took me a long while to even get where im at, and i think i still have some ways to go, maybe if as said before make stanzas and maybe some ryming words so the poem will have just like a nice flow to it thats all......comment me and i will do the same as you write more!!!
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Good work, Gurl. It makes me think. I wud say thats LOVE,Cos when u feel something of that kind truly from the depth for some one,i wud say that's LOVE. And, from my Xperience in the past, i bet it could be. But, it could also be something less than LOVE, and as Ugly as LOST, if u mind is only lying dead in the state infactuation.
But....believe me, it could still be love!!!!!!