When "Free" Doesn't Mean a Bargin.

by ether   Oct 22, 2008


Air Head.

There's always sunshine above the rain clouds:
Thousands of feet on the ground missing out.
I'm there yet not quite, one leg on the ground.
The other with a jetpack higher than clouds.
Lightning, thunder and wind; I hold in my hand.
I'd give it up if you gave me your world instead,
You crave it desperatly, I'm alone beyond the clouds.
Yet I found a way to fly without you, I'm all I need.
And I'm beginning to accept that this is who I am.

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  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    I loved how at first it showed that you would give something great up for this person and how in the end they weren't as important as you thought. Its a great piece that I interpreted as a test of time. how everything fades. not only people but there feelings for eachother. I may be ttly off though xp. I reallllly liked this one! I think you did a great job. very well done=]

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This was a beautifully written "break-free" poem. It's concept easily flows from one idea to the next. You're not too harsh with your words... which made it a more subtle read. Which I enjoyed... for the concept. The flow and word usage was excellent! This poem is flawless. And again, the title is amazing.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    A short but sweet write, i can really imagine your whole poem and it was no where near a bore niceness^^,

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Really unique title, very original. Great job there. I really enjoyed this poem, I thought it was really interesting.. hmm. It's nearly flawless; honestly, it has no real rhyme or anything but I thought you expressed yourself fairly well. I .. hm, not really sure if there's anything I would change.. length could always be longer.. but thats just what I prefer :] Great work though, 5/5.

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