Really unique title, very original. Great job there. I really enjoyed this poem, I thought it was really interesting.. hmm. It's nearly flawless; honestly, it has no real rhyme or anything but I thought you expressed yourself fairly well. I .. hm, not really sure if there's anything I would change.. length could always be longer.. but thats just what I prefer :] Great work though, 5/5.

A short but sweet write, i can really imagine your whole poem and it was no where near a bore niceness^^,

This was a beautifully written "break-free" poem. It's concept easily flows from one idea to the next. You're not too harsh with your words... which made it a more subtle read. Which I enjoyed... for the concept. The flow and word usage was excellent! This poem is flawless. And again, the title is amazing.

5/5

I loved how at first it showed that you would give something great up for this person and how in the end they weren't as important as you thought. Its a great piece that I interpreted as a test of time. how everything fades. not only people but there feelings for eachother. I may be ttly off though xp. I reallllly liked this one! I think you did a great job. very well done=]