Too far, You are.

by ALEX   Oct 22, 2008


You tore down your dreams today.
Had them hung up, but now they're thrown away.
Hold up ten fingers, robbed of all but nine,
I hope to death this isn't our time.
You took this too far.
My metal hope is yours for years to come
I'm sorry for the life you don't know you've undone.
Your tire tracks, your perfect harmony,
It's all for what, if you can't be with me?
I don't know where you are.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    This was interesting and different. The wording was good and so was the flow. I gave it 5/5 because I liked it and I saw nothing wrong with it.