Comments : Silent meditation

  • 16 years ago

    by John Long

    Very poignant. You seem at peace with the world and that is always a good thing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Ingrid,

    this poem should not be taken on face value alone. It speaks of faith and its power to reinstal love that was once misguided.

    Bruised kisses bestowed by a loved one...that sent chills through me, a reference to domestic violence, argueably the biggest love crime of all.

    Faith can restore all, can't it?

    ((hugs))

    Michael

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    ^^^Michael, the bruised cheeck was a metaphor. Never heard of the kiss of Judas? I was referring to the many times my lover betrayed me and my love for him.

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    Ingrid, this was really beautiful...I thought it had a serene feeling, a kind of acceptance of love in all its aspects. Very well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    A Beautiful poem.. Well written & beautifully penned ! 5/5