D: cryinqq

by NuNu   Oct 22, 2008


-theresz a qirl in my mirror cryinqq toniqht.
&&theres nothinqq i can tell her too make her feel alriqht.
take a bow; you hear the applause?
my heart is broken&&your dha cause.
you played your qame&&you won.
conqratsz i hope you had fun.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Enigma

    I really like the way you write, but it'd be so much easier to read if you typed properly xD

    Still, good stuff x]

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    The same here a lotz of times. u did a nice job. simple words but it did say a lot. Great job once again. keep it up!

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Rickilee

    This is one of my new favorites ha.
    I can totally relate and have been in that situation many times..
    This one is really really good.
    Goood job :)

    5/5!