This has several themes woven into it. The intricacies of relationships. Very well done to cover so much territory in so few words. :)

I really like this poem. It's really complex and has several different layers, yet comes together perfectly. Great job love it!!

I like it. well done. it touches on an issue that many of us feel.

great work.

Very nice.. I like it :-)
5/5
regards

Wonderful, Wonderful!!! Great Write!!!

This poem is a side of two opposites for me. I liked it, but hated the subject matter.

I know that this could have used a lot more polishing on the structure and the flow of the poem over all.

I felt that his potrayed a real life situation and a very sad situation that came about.

Aruging is not always the best point to do something, having discussions/disagreements is normal. Fighting I consider throwing and yelling and screaming. Arguements I consider heated debates.

I think the poem was good, it got you thinking.

Thank you as well for the nice comment.

5/5

Amazing poem... A must read poems for newly married people or spouses out of love... Its a great write. I guess you need to edit a bit but the errors are completely overshadowed by this great way of writing this poem.