"never shout and never whine."
`Your talking past tense for the whole poem BUT this line, which makes this line stick out to me, because it doesn't sound right. .. "Never shouted nor whined" maybe would be a better way of stating it. Shouted doesn't sound correct to me, is there another word you could use here?

Great flow and rhyme. It's a short poem yet it shows that you remember your father in a positive way, which is great. Touching write, great work.. 5/5. (: