New love

by Mia   Oct 23, 2008


Youre my new love
The someone whose life I want to be part of
Never thought I would fall so fast
Youre completely different from those in the past
Kind heart
This is why its so hard for me from you to part
Our feelings and thoughts we can share
For in this new love we have nothing to hide
In each other we can confide
Affection pleasure and emotion
We are committed to each other
Devotion

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  • 16 years ago

    by tigerdan

    Hi, Mia! Thats' good,but I would change this line, below, to make a little more sense...if you don't mind my help. :)

    The someone whos life want to be part of

    If you change it to this, it would make more sense.

    The someone whose life I want to be part of

    By adding, "I", it will make more sense.

    That's good keep writting. :)

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