Immune to the cold

by Ridd1ck Yulas   Oct 23, 2008


Its the way your eyes shine
the way you speak kind
its the way you smile
girl you drive me wild
its your cute little nose
the way your hair flows
when you let it go
just wanna let you know
that your like the rose
lit on a sunset coast
and you'll never know
how much i loved you girl
thought we'd never let it go

But you turned your back on me
when i needed you most
didn't even look back to see
if i got back on my feet
but don't worry about me
'cuz here i stand alone...
Immune to the cold

He came into your life
said you were his kind
finished around night
then he turned around
and threw you out
and 'tho you left me alone
you were so bold
as to return to my home
and the very next night
with a heart of stone
you repeated the process
like a heartless drone

Yes you turned your back on me
when i needed you most
couldn't even look back to see
if i got back on my feet
but don't worry about me, no
because here i stand alone...
immune to the cold

don't come running back
with tears in your eyes
cuz i despise your lies
and I'm tired of the times
when you were mine
cant use a burnt out match
time to start from scratch

cuz you turned your back on me
when i needed you most
wouldn't even look back to see
if i got back on my feet
but don't worry bout me now
cuz here i stand alone...
immune to the cold
immune to the cold

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  • 16 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is a great write. Very expressive and this type of experience we all or nearly came upon situations like that, keep it up, kel.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I think that a lot of people could relate to this poem. It is sad but true, to many people use others these days. The flow was consistent and the word choice was great. I gave it a 5/5

    Its the way your eyes shine
    the way you speak kind
    its the way you smile
    girl you drive me wild
    its your cute little nose
    the way your hair flows
    when you let it go
    just wanna let you know
    that your like the rose
    lit on a sunset coast
    and you'll never know
    how much i loved you girl
    thought we'd never let it go

    this is my favorite stanza. Everything about it is perfect.