Open Intrusion

by Beautiful Forever   Oct 23, 2008


How could you break such a beautiful exterior?
Shining so bright - my glow is vastly inferior,
Your light is blinding the emotions of my heart,
It's open for you - feel free to tear it apart,

Vague signs of love appear as a brilliant illusion,
Masked intentions follow - you're an evil intrusion,
Yet I smile as you continue on a devastating tour,
For the love you fake - I'll always be your wh0re,

Rearrange some of the pieces I've wrongly placed,
I've been broken before - luckily none were erased,
Maybe if I wish for you to fill my empty soul...
With a new love - you'll enable me to be whole,

You chose to sit here and wait for me to fall,
The tears from my heart - I'm losing them all,
Your love is a pain deep inside my aching chest,
I guess you really were - better than the rest...

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I apologize for the 0 in place of the "o" ... it's the only way they would accept the poem.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Sean that was truly touching..
    I felt like you focused on some contradictions here..I didn't really get the last line..I thought I'd be like "I guess you really were - just like the rest...
    So will you please explain to me more?

    Rearrange some of the pieces I've wrongly placed,
    I've been broken before - luckily none were erased,
    Maybe if I wish for you to fill my empty soul...
    With a new love - you'll enable me to be whole,

    This one was really well written, I enjoyed it the most !
    That was deep, Sean, I'm in absolute awe..I'm so sorry for what's happened to you..Alas, heart-breakers are everywhere.

    I love this piece, even though I have to admit I've read better than it from you.
    Still it was such an enjoyable write =)
    Keep impressing me
    xx