Comments : Open Intrusion

  • 16 years ago

    by Nee

    Sean that was truly touching..
    I felt like you focused on some contradictions here..I didn't really get the last line..I thought I'd be like "I guess you really were - just like the rest...
    So will you please explain to me more?

    Rearrange some of the pieces I've wrongly placed,
    I've been broken before - luckily none were erased,
    Maybe if I wish for you to fill my empty soul...
    With a new love - you'll enable me to be whole,

    This one was really well written, I enjoyed it the most !
    That was deep, Sean, I'm in absolute awe..I'm so sorry for what's happened to you..Alas, heart-breakers are everywhere.

    I love this piece, even though I have to admit I've read better than it from you.
    Still it was such an enjoyable write =)
    Keep impressing me
    xx