by Faithless Oct 23, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
The first time my eyes met yours |
by SashaMirage
You told a very good story in poetic form. I think you described the topic you were given very well. 5/5 |
Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5 |
by reJoyce
I really liked the line "You shut my mind of all the profits and loss" it perfectly says: selfless love and tenacity. funny situation. it was sad how it ended though, moderate and love will last forever. |
by kelleyana
This poem makes me smile it reminds me of when i was 16 and my boyfriend works with my dad.... Exactly this were my story. |