This poem makes me smile it reminds me of when i was 16 and my boyfriend works with my dad.... Exactly this were my story.
Sometime chances merits to be taken.
Great poem.

I really liked the line "You shut my mind of all the profits and loss" it perfectly says: selfless love and tenacity. funny situation. it was sad how it ended though, moderate and love will last forever.

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

You told a very good story in poetic form. I think you described the topic you were given very well. 5/5