Raining, All Around

by ALEX   Oct 23, 2008


My own shadows playing out
across pure skin.
Sunlight
pacing itself across blue sky.
Falling on the world.
Rips in consciousness;
in reality.
Dips in space;
continuum.
Assembly lines of my thoughts;
recalled products of my awareness.
Raining, racing down on me
to finish first.
Lastly, I'm not alone.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked this poem. It is different I have not read a poem like it. It was another fast read. The format was nice.

    You might add to it and also change the format a little to make people think more about what you are trying to say. (only a suggestion)

    I really liked this one. I gave it a 5/5