Wow i really liked this!

Behind tough, imposing outsides,
I am brittle; weak.
(Brittle describes this really well)

This invasion has gnawed me
down to the core.
(i like this part)

I am beaten.
(short and sweet)

My time line shortened by
small monsters,
(wow i really liek these 2 lines)

while my brothers
look upon me with pity.
In them, hidden; secret relief
to be watching me fall instead.
(wow really sad)

I reall likked this poem it was short and sweet. really sad!!!!!!! but 10/10

good job!!