Great poem, I really liked it. I can relate to. The flow was great as well as the word choice. 5/5 I see nothing wrong with it.

This poem really touched me because I understand exactly how it feels. I could relate so well. It also helped that the flow and the word usage in this poem were AMAZING!

He hides behind his lies,
He just wanted to dry her eyes.

Wow, these lines just... really reached my heart. Because I know EXACTLY what this feels like. (Being a guy and all)

Very sentimental piece for me... 5/5